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Through the Mind of a Child by ~shep4life:iconshep4life:



Last Night   6/27/08


They are fighting again.
A pattern is forming.
I'm seeing a trend.
The signs are alarming.
Very soon their voices will raise -
I am only eight and I am afraid.
In the kitchen the tempers are flaring.
They don't realize the burden I'm bearing.
Mommy has shattered a dish on the floor.
Daddy's fist has gone through a door.
My mind tries to drift to a place and a time
when we all got along and everything was fine.
Its getting harder and harder to find, for
Father is angry and Mother is not kind.
She is screaming at the top of her lungs -
something about money, women, and drugs.
Now his violence will be aimed toward me.
If I stay still and quiet maybe he won't see.
My little sister is starting to cry - she doesn't
understand, she doesn't know why.
We should hide in our room and play a fun game.
And try to block out our family's secret shame.
Tonight will be filled with pain and with sorrow.
Hopefully we'll get to see the light of tomorrow.
©2008-2009 ~shep4life
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Author's Comments

I wrote this after someone close to me was hit by her boyfriend and their 3 and a half year old saw the whole thing and explained it in his own little way. Heartbreaking.

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:iconitismestwin:
Thats an awesome poem kind sad but hey look at what i write lol good job :highfive:

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:iconpenguinsrmylife:
wow this is amazing... i mean the story behind it is sad and the story the poem is telling is sad but like u did an amazing job describing it... good job! :) :hug:

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A woman's heart is a deep ocean full of secrets
:iconclementine-esfsm:
"In the kitchen the tempers are flaring.
They don't realize the burden I'm bearing."
best part :)
very good, but heartbreakingly sad.
nice rhyming flow
:heart: see u monday!!! lolz

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This sucks ass. So much ass. You don't even know how much ass this had to suck to become this sucking of an ass.
:iconshep4life:
lol...thanks!

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconshep4life:
awesome! thanks alot! as always you rock!

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconshep4life:
wow is right...

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconshep4life:
thanks..it is heartbreaking...flow is hard sometimes but it just came to me...

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconitismestwin:
you're welcome :lol:

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:iconshep4life:
:)

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)

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